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Beach Shoot - Felt Great getting out again
Old 08-02-2005, 03:54 AM   #1 (permalink)
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after almost 1 1/2 month on hiatus waiting for my lens to be fixed.

here's a couple with the beautiful stephanie MM#18142.

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Re: Beach Shoot - Felt Great getting out again
Old 08-02-2005, 07:18 AM   #2 (permalink)
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They're both good shots. I think they'd be a lot better if you had gotten more light on her face. On my monitor, the reds dominate a bit too much. If that's so, you might want to adjust your levels in post. Nice work, keep posting.

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Re: Beach Shoot - Felt Great getting out again
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Beautiful scenery, beautiful model, but what bothers me about it... hmmmm, I'm going to do a poor job of paraphrasing something that I read on the net that seems to apply here.

A photographer showed a new set of pictures to his mentor with excitement and asked what he thought of them. The mentor looked at them a moment and replied, "you wasted your film". The photographer was crushed, the lighting was on, the color was on, beautiful model, beautiful scenery, he just couldn't see the problem, so he asked. His mentor replied, "Look at her eyes, they're dead." and with that the photographer reexamined the pic's and saw what he meant, the eyes, and therefore the face, was expressionless or even bored looking.

With glamour, the eyes are an incredible asset or detraction. Do you have a shot or two of her with some sort of expression on her face? I'd love to see them!

If not, and you get a chance to shoot her again, perhaps get her into some sort of fantasy role playing in her head that she can go with, something to challenge her....

Hope I didn't offend you, just answering the best way I know how...


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Re: Beach Shoot - Felt Great getting out again
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she's a pretty new model, and her look is the same in all the photos except the one that I captured with her eyes closed, which are kind of interesting.






i'll try the fantasy idea's next time with a new model to try to pull some different looks
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