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Another of JJ for critique
Old 07-25-2005, 07:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Any pointers to improve are appreciated.
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Re: Another of JJ for critique
Old 07-25-2005, 09:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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honestly, I don't like the makeup in this one....but I like JJ....she's a cool lady!

jj on a camaro:

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Sorry...PS
Old 07-25-2005, 09:17 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I posted hurriedly before.

Technically, I think the lighting in the photo is good IMO, I'm just not a fan of the make-up here as it makes her eyes look recessed and dark...opposite of the bright colors of the photo otherwise.

The photo I posted of her also has it's flaws, but here it is again as the obligatory photo post...besides, I like it for what it was meant for....flamboyancy [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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Old 07-25-2005, 09:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Your photo is sizzling though. I am trying my hand at this to learn.
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Re: Another of JJ for critique
Old 07-25-2005, 10:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I'd agree the eye makeup in particular is a little too much, sinks her eyes back into her head. Lighting is good, background kind of clashes with the bathing suit. Model and pose are both HOT! Thanks for the view [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]
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Good start! The trying is at least half the fun!
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Re: There is something
Old 07-26-2005, 12:02 PM   #7 (permalink)
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There is something about this image that is "hard" and unattractive, but I can't put my finger on what it is... Maybe the color coordination? I don't know... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/ooo.gif[/img]




 
 
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I'm going to start posting tiny little thumbnail images for the "obligation" images (snicker). [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
 
 
Re: Another of JJ for critique
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I love all the emotion this image holds but I dislike the hair chunk between her arm and head. This add to the drama the image creates but it is less flattering than if it had been back. But once gain I like dramatic images and this one has the life so many portraits lack.



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Re: Another of JJ for critique
Old 07-27-2005, 12:23 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Not exactly liking the color background with the color of swimsuit.

Wild hair is bugging me on this one.

Dramatic eyes but like to see more fine tuned foundation and blush.

Not a fan of squished boobs.

Nice S curve and pose. that I like a lot.

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