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One for critique.. after long time
Old 07-22-2005, 10:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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One from today's shoot.



Model: Amazeya Jade
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Re: One for critique.. after long time
Old 07-22-2005, 10:29 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It has been awhile I have seen you around here....

This shot could use a little more light in the eyes. The right hand growing out of her hip is a distraction. Hair showing between body and arm bothers me a little and the image looks like a bump in the contrast may help it. I am no expert so take all of this for what it is worth.

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Re: One for critique.. after long time
Old 07-23-2005, 04:11 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The light is behind her...... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/blush.gif[/img]

Look at that warm glow on her back of her arm and neck! This just makes me want to ring your neck for not recognizing where the main light is coming from.

Put the fill flash down and recognize the natural light and use it to your best advantage. You have this nice warm glow and then you cooled it down with shadow and fill flash? UCKIE POOO POOOO........

The tree serves no purpose so I am sure you could have turned the model into the natural light and built on that....

Sorry, drank too much coffee tonight.....

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Old 07-24-2005, 09:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Left from home at 6.00AM (~20 min drive) for this shoot and it was still too sunny and hot by the time when this picture was taken.

All the comments were respectfully accepted. Thanks Scott and JT!
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