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Old 07-21-2005, 11:02 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Just shot with JJ in LA.
Please give advice on how to improve.
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Re: Critique please
Old 07-21-2005, 01:57 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice pose. Beautiful model. I hate critiquing another photographer's work, especially since you did a nice job, but I have too much time on my hands today due to a cancelled shoot, so please forgive my critique (and maybe my bad mood). [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]

Using the purple light is creative, but I'm not a big fan of the purple bloom (glow) around her hair. Also, adding a little hair light could have given her hair some definition, instead of looking a bit like Elvira. one last thing ... the angle of her front leg makes her thigh look big ... lifting it off the chair might have helped. Other than that, I'd love to see more from this shoot.
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Old 07-22-2005, 12:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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There are just little things in my mind. I agree that I do not care for the purple glow in her hair but oddly enough I like the purple shadows on the floor and I don't know why. I would have preferred to see her left hand, having it disappear behind her legs is a distraction. She is lovely and I like your work together. Keep shootin'.





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Old 07-22-2005, 12:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Now thats what I am talkin about... Welcome back to the world of passing on your knowledge. Makes me want to go shoot something...

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Re: Critique please
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Me too, odd isn't it. I had 4 models scheduled over the next 4 days, now I'm down to two maybees. I may take to the outdoors if I can stand the heat. Have a great weekend.

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Old 07-22-2005, 12:43 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thank you guys for taking the time to look and give suggestions.
I have more images which I have not had time to edit and post. But I will get to it so please keep the advice coming.
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Old 07-22-2005, 10:29 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Pretty cool you noticed the same things I did but overall it is a very good shot. Jim
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I like the pose, too. Did you try it in B&W yet?
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