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As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
Old 07-21-2005, 08:42 AM   #1 (permalink)
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We would like to get some input on my new COMMERCIAL comp-card (I am now agency listed - waka waka [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]). Sorry I'm not nude... I don't have that kind of body and I like "cheese-up" in my images too much.(heh heh heh, believe me, you don't want to see me naked... Those stretch marks on my hip are now on my thigh) I basically suck at being sexy... I am forced to stick with you know, normal work [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]... Images and Design are all CopyRights and compliments of our very own expert photographer "RandyMan." Give him his kudos and just dues (or just send money in small unmarked bills). [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]



Sorry the images are sort of small... (like almost invisible due to the limited amount of photo space I am allowed to upload); just view and judge the composition, ignore the actual images...

(and one more note: of course you all know that I did my own MU work, heh heh heh - plug-plug) [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
 
 
Re: As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
Old 07-21-2005, 08:49 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I am no expert on comp cards... But as for the posing nude and stretch marks... This is the digital age girl...We can PS those out... LOL

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Re: Actually, I lied...
Old 07-21-2005, 09:35 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Actually, I lied... I don't have any stretch marks... ha ha... (yet)

My boobies are still perky. I still have all of my teeth (so far).


But realistically, I am not glamour type material, so I don't want to target that type of market.

If it matters at all, none of my images were photoshopped. (God, Randy is AWESOME with that camera!)

"What y'all see is what ya get,"that's my motto...
 
 
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Old 07-21-2005, 09:38 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Well in that case... we can add some stretch marks, Take away some of the perk and remove a tooth or two... that could make for some interesting shots dont ya think?

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Re: Actually, I lied...
Old 07-21-2005, 09:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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ha ha... Seriously, I did remove some of my teeth once... along with my hair... I thought is was funny as hell, but my "manager" at the time was pissed off about it... I believe she said something about my inability to be professional... and I was lectured about violating the copyright laws. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/ooo.gif[/img]

I can't help it... The Devil made me do it... It's just who I am... This ball of unusually dry and stupid humor... It's from my dad's side...

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Re: As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
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Very nice!
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Re: As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
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[ QUOTE ]
I basically suck at being sexy..

[/ QUOTE ]

In what universe is that exactly?

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Re: As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
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Love the photos and a nice clean design, but (there's always a but, isn't there?) you need to check on the side that's got your stats that the wording is properly centered. It's a possibility that it might be physically centered so you're gonna need to make sure that it looks visually centered. It does happen from time to time that something needs to be visually centered instead of physically. Hope that makes sense, I couldn't find a ruler to check if it was physically centered though.

On the other side the photo at the top needs to be brought down a little so that the black space at the top is equal to that on the bottom, maybe even bring in the one on the bottom right a little too, just to get it nice and even and more balanced (kinda hard to tell because of the size).

Hope this helps.
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Re: As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
Old 07-21-2005, 03:14 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Reese

I just LOVE that headshot! GO RANDY! As for the backside - that's not a bad layout. There's always a choice between doing like everyone else does it OR doing something different. You could leave it like it is, or change it to the more common 4 - up. The same number of people will love/hate it for the same reason!

I do have reservations about the "guitar" image. The body of that guitar is large for your body size. It kind of looks out of place. Plus, on a comp card, I like to see you engaging me rather than looking down. That's me. I know you have a TON of good images from Randy - so there's probably one where the guitar isn't so dominant and I see your eyes.

Best of luck
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Re: As per the request of my Photographer RandyMan
Old 07-21-2005, 07:17 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Love the headshot.. I have to agree with a previous poster about the image with the guitar... it has a prominent place on the card (because of its size) so it should be an image that showcases "you" (not the guitar).

... and you are the sexiest woman I know.

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