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Old 07-14-2005, 07:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 07-14-2005, 10:32 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the concept and with a few changes I think it would become a classic image.

Think symetry. The fan here drops to the left, the blades aren't all the same width and the image gets hazy at the edges. I would also raise the fan a little too.

If the fan doesn't cover your ear lobe I would either not wear earings or wear a stud, but it too would be a minor distraction.

Try this again and I think you'll like the results.

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Paula,
From the looks of your portfolio your off to a good start. The prop works in this photo. You have beautiful eyes and the pose and prop draws attention to them. Keep shooting and keep posting!
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I would crop it to a vertical format and lose the dead space in the upper corners. It will still obviously be a fan and I think the closer crop would put more emphasis on the model. Right now the fan seems to be the subject of the image. Unless you're selling fans, I'd crop tighter.

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Old 07-16-2005, 01:21 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the shot but agree that with different cropping it would be more powerful. But the most obvious problem area to me, is the bloodshot eyes, either that or they've picked up a color cast. In any event, a tiny bit of Photoshop work could make the eyes look a lot better. When you have great eyes, you always want to be sure they're presented at their best.

Here's an example (before eyes fixed):


After eyes fixed (done quickly, 30 seconds, can be done better)


You can see that the corners of the eyes nearest the nose on both sides show the most improvement.

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Thank you very much --Here is the one cropped and fixed a little and I'm also including a different shot from the fan set --Paula

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Better.

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