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Denisse from PR
Old 07-12-2005, 01:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I shot with Denisse last week when I was in NY and I have been debating with myself as to the placement of the model. It is kind of shot straight on and very little diagonals, especially in the second image.

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Re: Denisse from PR
Old 07-12-2005, 06:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Both good. I like #2 best. Someone will likely ding you for the hair in her face, but it doesn't bother me. I really like the way her back dips down so low and shows the horizon. What a great smile she has. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Denisse from PR
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Both of these are winners. Nice work
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Re: Denisse from PR
Old 07-12-2005, 06:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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The good. Your model is a hottie, the colors look good, I like your camera angle. What't not good. I wasn't there to help assist you on such a pretty day at the beach. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]

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Re: Denisse from PR
Old 07-13-2005, 05:42 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Andre:

I think you have it turned around. The beach/ocean horizons along with her legs, lead the viewer up the diagonal of her back to her face. (stray hair included) Even though her hair is hiding her neck, her expression makes up for it, and the 90º angle of her upper and lower arm anchors the left side of the horizon. Nice smooth lines.

In #1 though...we have curves that lead us to one beautiful smile, but the variety of colors from her chin to the sand are confusing and distracting. If you can, crop it to a head shot.

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Re: Denisse from PR
Old 07-13-2005, 07:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Yes she is a happy go lucky girl and it shows. Personally I don't have problems with the hair. Thanks for the comments.
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Rick,

You're $0.02 is worth it. Yes there is a problem with different colors on the skin. I could even it out in post to make it more pleasing. Wind is always a problem. I tried to get the trays to sit several times. The good part is that the wind came from the front and not the back.

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