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Old 07-10-2005, 11:59 AM   #1 (permalink)
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a little custom color work

Canon 20D
1 AB 400 with white umbrella
1/60 shutter
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couple of things bug me a bit with this image:

1. i'm not a big fan of the "B&W then add selective color" thing to begin with, and in this image the red/pink of her panties is distracting.

2. her expression... i'm not sure what it sez to me, but whatever it is, she don't look to thrilled to be there.

3. since you have the PS skills to do that "B&W with selective color" thing, i'm thinking you have the skills to smooth out under her eyes and some of the splotchy shadowing on her face.

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The first thing I notice about this picture is the way her panties are bunched up. It would look a lot better if you could smooth that out.
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You are right, she wasn't thrilled to be there. She was just helping me with some lighting is all.

Did a little healing brush and some dodge tool......can you see a difference?

and thanks for the comments.

I know I shouldn't have used the umbrella on this...it softened the pic too much...I wanted really drastic lighting.
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yeah... a little. i think you need to unflatten the image a bit. you can do that in levels or curves-- eveything is in the gray tones... there's no blacks or whites in the image. also, when softening the skin, try a bit guassian blur, but make sure you keep eyes, hair, lips, that sort of stuff sharp. the last thing you might do is sharpen the image a bit witht he unsharp mask tool.
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