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Marylin for critique
Old 07-08-2005, 09:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I worked with Marylin yesterday in Lincoln Park in Chicago. I'm trying to take a few step backwards and learn more with natural light before it gets cold and I'm forced back inside with the strobes.

This was done with all natural light and reflectors. A transluscent reflector was used to diffuse the direct sunlight, and a second white reflector was used to add some catchlight to her eyes. The camera was a Nikon D100 with a Nikkor 85mm f/1.8 set at f/5.6 and 1/500 of a second, which is underexposed by 1/3 of a stop.

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Re: Marylin for critique
Old 07-08-2005, 10:15 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks really good to me, I would have PS's the areas just below her eyes. I think the dark areas need to be lightened just a bit. Other than that...nice job!

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Old 07-08-2005, 10:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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OMG! I love her hair! It's so awesome! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
 
 
With your suggestions
Old 07-08-2005, 11:28 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Steve,

Thanks for the suggestions. I lightened the shadows under the eyes and changed the levels and curves slightly. I also gave it another pass of sharpening because the eyes and earing looked soft to me.

Alan

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Re: With your suggestions
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Ding Ding Ding...we have a winner....IMHO.

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Re: With your suggestions
Old 07-10-2005, 04:16 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I didn't think reducung the shadows under her eyes would make much difference. I was wrong. It made a great shot a remarkable shot.

Thanks for posting
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Re: With your suggestions
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Thanks. I'll post more from this shoot over the next few weeks.
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