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First Critique....(N)
Old 07-07-2005, 04:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Thoughts? Please be gentle...



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Re: First Critique....(N)
Old 07-07-2005, 05:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Does being gentle mean not telling you what's wrong with the photo? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

But here goes anyway:

#1 is an interesting idea and pose, but the lighting produced way too many hot spots that have lost all detail.

#2 is better lit but still has hot spots. This shot works better than the first. When I do these kind of hair shots I always make sure to get all the hair in the shot and not have part of it cropped out because that usually suggests you were not paying enough attention to the exact cropping in the viewfinder.



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Re: First Critique....(N)
Old 07-07-2005, 05:36 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Does being gentle mean not telling you what's wrong with the photo? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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Exactly! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

Thanks for your feedback!
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Re: First Critique....(N)
Old 07-08-2005, 01:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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# 1 is a good concept but it makes me feel uncomfortable (probably just me though).

# 2 is breathtaking. I absolutely love it and can't take my eyes from it.

You have a great eye and creativity.
 
 
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Thanks Jeremy posting our work..! #2 is my favorite that you have sent to me so far. I think i would like it better if you could ps some of the distractions out of the dark background. Thanks to everyone elses positive and truthfull feedback as well. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] ttyl jigo!

I liked this one out of that set as well..

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