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My First Post Here Looking for Some Constructive Feedback (N)
Old 07-07-2005, 02:32 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is one of my first posts here and I am looking for some good constructive feedback. Thanks in advance!

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Re: My First Post Here Looking for Some Constuctive Feedback (N)
Old 07-07-2005, 02:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome! I kinda like it! Could maybe use a little more contrast. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: My First Post Here Looking for Some Constuctive Feedback (N)
Old 07-07-2005, 03:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Rick,

Thanks for the comment...I will see about trying for more contrast next time.
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Old 07-07-2005, 03:13 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice and clean.. clear and balanced... I like it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

It's very pretty and "artistic..."
 
 
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Flich if you think it needs more contrast you can do that in photoshop...
I like it the way it is...gives it the softness you were going for with the shadows of the blinds... the lines and compostion are good.


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I played around with the contrast in PS. I actually went further in contrast adjustments then what is posted and I didn't think the results were as pleasing.
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see theres your answer!!
not dissing DBA here....but do what you like...if an adjustment ruins it for YOU....then dont do it.
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I like the shot on its technical merits. The thing bothing me a little is the asymetrical shapes of the breasts. her left breast has a weird shape caused by the twist of her body and accentuated by the shadows. Nice shot

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Re: My First Post Here Looking for Some Constructive Feedback (N)
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Just another opinion.... I think that if the image was portrait orientation it would better keep the focus on the subject. I keep looking from the subject to the black space and back. I certainly am a fan of some negative space but I think there should be less or maybe more here.... Thanks for sharing. Jim
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see theres your answer!!
not dissing DBA here....but do what you like...if an adjustment ruins it for YOU....then dont do it.
JMO

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LOL! Not to worry Don, no "diss" taken. It's all subjective. I just like dark blacks and sharp lines in these kind of images but that's just me. And, I'm still learning. Bottom line is , it's a great image! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img]

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