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first time in a studio... CRITIQUE ME!
Old 06-29-2005, 01:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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lemme have it! im including the light setup so you can maybe give feedback on the placement of lights for next time.



Critique THIS one, duh
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Re: first time in a studio... CRITIQUE ME!
Old 06-29-2005, 08:44 AM   #2 (permalink)
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The background spot seems a bit too hot. I think she is also too close to the background. Colors and skin tone looks perfect on my monitor. Let's see more.

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Re: Reese Shark Attack
Old 06-29-2005, 09:28 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Dum Dum... Dum Dum...Dum Dum...Dum Dum Dum Dum Dum Dum....

Hmm... The first image looks like a "snapshot." [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

The second image "looks cool;" I like the composition for the most part, but the backdrop is wrinkled and distracting and I don't understand the purpose of the background lighting... This isn't really much of a critique, but more of a question so as to understand the image's purpose which I can't seem to quite grasp... It's a head shot obviously - yet there are distinct distractions stealing some of your subject's attention.

I really like the model choice... She has that anarchy wild child look... That's "supa" hot! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
 
 
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Dum Dum... Dum Dum...Dum Dum...Dum Dum Dum Dum Dum Dum....

Hmm... The first image looks like a "snapshot." [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

The second image "looks cool;" I like the composition for the most part, but the backdrop is wrinkled and distracting and I don't understand the purpose of the background lighting... This isn't really much of a critique, but more of a question so as to understand the image's purpose which I can't seem to quite grasp... It's a head shot obviously - yet there are distinct distractions stealing some of your subject's attention.

I really like the model choice... She has that anarchy wild child look... That's "supa" hot! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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number 1 IS a snapshot, to show the lighting.

the purpose of the shot was to let me play in a studio with lights, as i never have. The purpose behind each light? i have NO clue! i was just messing around trying to see how it would look. I need to space her more from the background next time.

as far as the model, its my girlfriend. everyone on the forum keeps forgetting im 'young and hip' !!!! i have colored hawk hair, piercings and tattoos! THESE are my people!!
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Re: first time in a studio... CRITIQUE ME!
Old 06-29-2005, 03:04 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The background spot seems a bit too hot. I think she is also too close to the background. Colors and skin tone looks perfect on my monitor. Let's see more.

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i actually GAVE her some tone haha, shes very white. thanks for the feedback, common response has been mentioning the background, i will work on it! thanks

and here is another, not as fond of it

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Re: first time in a studio... CRITIQUE ME!
Old 06-29-2005, 10:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I love the head shot --I think she looks great and the lighting and cropping is perfect! I think she'd look awesome with wet hair and have her shake her head around some. It's great to have a girlfriend as a model so you can try all the suggestions you get (if you want to) --Paula

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Re: I like this one too
Old 06-30-2005, 08:56 AM   #7 (permalink)
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That head shot is nice too... Less distraction going on... Why did you not have preference for it? Is it because it doesn't really show off her more unique physical personality as the one with the tatoo seems to do?

It does seem to give off a slight "fashion-like" feel... Were you aiming for more of an alternative appearence? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
 
 
Re: I like this one too
Old 06-30-2005, 05:22 PM   #8 (permalink)
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no i just think her pose is a little weird, mouth open sort of akward i guess.
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