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1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-28-2005, 11:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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comments always welcome


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1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-28-2005, 11:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey Gary....just a couple of things I noticed right away....you can see the 'black line' around her arms, which makes this photo seem like that it's been altered on photoshop.
2ndly, the light in the forefront does not match the background lighting...maybe just the way the model is positioned.
anyways, thats my 2 cents worth of input.
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Re: 1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-29-2005, 12:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Gary,

Nice photograph of a beautiful model standing next to a motorcycle. Next time have her interact with the prop and wear something that connects them. Dare to be different.

I do not see dark lines and the lighting seems natural to me.

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Re: 1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-29-2005, 12:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Nicely lit.

I love the balance with the background, if the front fill had gone lighter you would be washing the model out, perhaps a tad darker to go for richer skin tone, but at this point its a matter of personal taste.

The only thing bugging me would be I kinda want to see either the whole bike or the front half. I know its a bike but part of me wants to see more of it.

Perhaps try a lower angle of view, she would then look taller.

The image still works very well. Is it a senior portrait?

Hope this helps, keep on posting,

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Re: 1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-29-2005, 07:35 AM   #5 (permalink)
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It's a good picture. The red, green, and black are good contrasting colors. The model is smiling. Main light is good. Although I think it is minor, the hotspots, the blue sky through the trees, may be a problem.

The scene is good. I would experiment with different angles, perhaps focusing closer to the model.

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Re: 1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-29-2005, 02:01 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I agree on the angles I love to shoot from below eye level, this is shot from above eye level which makes it all look too much from above, If you know what I mean.
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Re: 1st outdoor shoot with this model
Old 06-29-2005, 02:58 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Good Shot. The crop is a bit off. Not sure what focal length you were using. A wider angle would have allowed you to get closer to the model, as well as keep the entire prop in the shot. She is a great looking model. Having her interact with the bike would have been nice also. My .02. Keep shooting.
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Old 06-30-2005, 09:04 AM   #8 (permalink)
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This image reminds me of a snapshot... It doesn't have the "photographer feel" to it... It is more like an image a tourist would take at a bike show.... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] But it's nice picture of a pretty model (with beautiful skin might I add) either way. I think someone else said it best when they said, experiment with different angles. Make either your bike or your model the focus of your attention... and then find a way to make your focus really stand out...



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Is it me or is my computer not showing the image everyone is talking about? All I see is this girl looking at me with a black backdrop. Damn.. I think its getting late [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
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