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Old 06-28-2005, 09:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is another image from my first shoot with Yana. Please give me your comments / critique on this image. Suggestions on how I can improve appreciated. Lighting was from single strobe overhead shot into an umbrella.

Critiquing my own a bit here, does the shadow in her left eye detract from the image? Havent convinced myself if it looks ok, or if I should have used a reflector to put a little fill into the eye.



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Old 06-28-2005, 09:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Any sort of reflector to pick up in the eye would be nice. Good work.
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Old 06-28-2005, 09:44 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Dean the shadow doesnt bother me.....but here we go..back to the cropping hands off !!! does it work? or does it not?
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Old 06-28-2005, 09:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Agreed, interresting thread you started Don..... yup I see I cut off the fingers again( maybe that should be my calling card [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] ) But, and I may be wrong ( naw, that would never happen) does it really detract, since it isnt the focal point of the image?

Wonder how the rest feel?

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Old 06-28-2005, 09:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I would think a little more light in the eyes wouldnt hurt. The hands being cut off where they are also bothers me. As I follow the arms across it just leads me out of the image.

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Old 06-28-2005, 10:02 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks, I wish I would have included the hands in the shot.......better luck next time. Would the image be more pleasing if I were to crop some of the arm out, or would I still be in the same boat?

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Old 06-28-2005, 10:06 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I like it. I would have liked to see all of her hands and maybe a little more of her stomach. But that's just me. I have been trying to get the same black and white you have accomplished. What did you do to get it that way?
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Old 06-28-2005, 10:11 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Maybe so. If you were to bring the crop into just past her hair. I think it would change the whole feel of the image. I'd have added about 3 more inches of her torso, as well. But just my 2¢. I like the image a lot. No problem with the shadow on her eye, the reflection off the white of the eye is what I think makes that stand out.
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Old 06-28-2005, 10:14 PM   #9 (permalink)
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This was a color image I desaturated in PS, and adjusted the levels to get the shadows to look like I wanted. Didnt do any fancy editing, still learning to use PS.
Hope this is what you were looking for.
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Old 06-28-2005, 10:21 PM   #10 (permalink)
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That's the problem with PS, you could use it for 2 or 3 years and still be learning it. It does so damn much. Everytime I desaturate, my photos tend to get grainy. I've been using monochrome under channel mixer, but I am just not happy with the way it looks. Which levels do you adjust?
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