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Old 06-28-2005, 08:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I listened to all the critiques I have recieved in my post on the main forum. I have reworked the image a bit and would now like to see if you think these are improved.

Original from other post.


Now the 2 reworked images... I cant really take out the pole...
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Old 06-28-2005, 09:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it...do you? It's the details that count to make a nice image vs. a snapshot.

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Old 06-28-2005, 09:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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definite improvements. Now some last details.. The hair on her arms could stand to be smoothed and the same with the veins on the backs of her hands.
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Old 06-28-2005, 09:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Scott:

Hey brother, this image needs to go into the Do Over File. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]My file is getting pretty thick itself. While this is an improvement over the original it still contains "rule breakers" that keep it from becoming the image you originally had in mind. "See" it again and reshoot it.

Her disembodied left arm is less of a distraction in the color image but it takes my eye right to it, right up to the missing thumb and off the page in the b/w.

The skin showing through her dress highlights a deviation from an otherwise nice set of vertical lines through out the image and gives her that "wide" look someone else mentioned in the other post.

You must have read that "Dare to Suck" post of Jimmyd's. So thank you for daring to post the only image in your GG portfolio that sucked for eveyone to critique. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

You know you have my encouragement to comment on anything I post anywhere.

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I really like it in black & white!! Makes all the difference!

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Thanks Rick, That just made my whole day... And I will certainly be critiqueing more often. Thanks again.
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