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Old 06-23-2005, 07:40 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Please let me know if this is big enough to critique

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Old 06-23-2005, 10:52 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Yes it is big enough, and because it's so big, I think you might want to remove the fly away hairs from her face. Other than that, IMHO...nice shot.
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I concur with my fellow Californian Steve, about the hair. I have done it many time and it is hard to see sometimes until it is up on the monitor. One other item, I would tweak the color balance a little to take out the excessive blue in the skin tones. Nice model. -Jim



Tiffany...had a few I had to remove.
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Old 06-23-2005, 11:51 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very nice shot.
I don't mind the hairs to be honest, they give it a bit of life.
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Old 06-23-2005, 01:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The pose and crop are good. I think the lighting is fairly flat though.

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I have to agree that the lighting is a bit flat. The photo needs some contrast adjustment and the eyes do not look very sharp.
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hair a little to flying, contrast adjustment, focus (next time just focus only on the eyes, some have said nose because of dof), crop on left and right side to tight and next time no jewelry unless it's needed for the shoot.

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