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Old 06-22-2005, 07:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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But let me have it. I do want to know what you think and what I did wrong [image]http://www.garageglamour.com/portfolios/photographers/DnSProductions/11810.jpg
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Re: 1st post go easy one me
Old 06-22-2005, 08:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I can't say that I'm an expert by any means, especially being on the other side of the camera, but the first thing I noticed was the cropping through the left nipple. It just makes it look a little blurry and weird. The only other remark I can make is the facial shadow on her arm throws me off a little. Like I said, though, I'm just offering my opinion. Keep posting.

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Old 06-22-2005, 08:40 PM   #3 (permalink)
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are you sure you want easy? if you want easy..you came to the wrong forum!!
trust me!
anyway...I agree with christian on the crop...now another point...ask yourself if this image would have more impact had her nose not broke the plain of her cheek..next..I was told not to let models have a romantic relationship with trees in one of my images...not sure it pertains here(my inexperience). and Im not sure about the shadow of her face on her arm..some may find this interesting..I find it distracting..
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Re: 1st post go easy one me
Old 06-22-2005, 09:08 PM   #4 (permalink)
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First...a larger image is gonna get better and more accurate critiques.

From what I can see, the crop is not good for me at all. The shadow of her face really distracts me as well.

Don posed a very good question as well. I would be interested in see what else you got from this shoot.

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Re: 1st post go easy one me
Old 06-22-2005, 09:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Dude...did you really critique with a question for the poster? I am impressed! LOL

Stay cool Don and say hello to the Mrs for me...

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oh crap did I do that?
as far as staying cool...Im trying...its flippin hot here.
I have a photoshoot tomorrow..maybe I'll have some None DeAnn images for you to shred in a few days.
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Cool... I have a shoot tomorrow too.. With a model that I have shot a few times in the past and she wants more sexy glamour stuff this time. Should be a fun day for me for a change... So you will have some of my work to rip apart as well...

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First of all, welcome to GG Dan, I have not met your aquaintaince.

As far as the photo, besides the size of the photo being a bit too small for full tech critiqueing (which I will leave to the photogs [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]), she honestly looks like she is doing one of those deoderant commercials were the models are sniffing their pitts. I also would like to see a bit more of her face, a standard profile I think might work which would also pull her away from the arm pitt.

I look forward to seeing more, do you have any others from this set?
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she honestly looks like she is doing one of those deoderant commercials were the models are sniffing their pitts.

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you just made my night [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Re: 1st post go easy one me
Old 06-23-2005, 07:27 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Ok 1st thanks to all of you. I do want to do better and maybe with your help I can. Yes I do have more from this shoot. The model never worked as a model before. I do most of my work at a drag strip but love working with the ladies. I dont know how to post bigger but will try. I also love hearing from models as well on how todo better so thanks
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