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Old 06-20-2005, 11:54 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 06-21-2005, 01:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Eric,

Technically, it's fine... the exposure is right on.. the lighting kinda stark, but fitting with the locale.. but... the image doesn't "speak" to me in any way other than a snapshot or outtake. Doesn't look like it's a glamour shot (eye contact somewhere else for no apparent reason).. nor fashion (what's she selling?)...

I've gone past this one a couple of times and wasn't going to give ya a negative critique, but... your work is normally so cool that this one stands out for it's lack of focus (at least, any that I can relate to without knowing the 'story' behind the shot).

Sorry, dude... this one just don't work for me. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img]

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Well, Since I opened my mouth yesterday and said "I will critique anyone I dont care how big they are" I guess I have an opportunity to back up my words.

The shot seems a little soft to me on my monitor. But more then that I am really not diggin the crop on the bottom. Toes on one foot cut off and only seeing the heel on the other. I would have to agree that I am not getting the story here. I also agree that it seems like an out take or snapshot to me. Definately not what I am used to seeing from you Eric. But thanks for showing that all of your shots arent perfect. It makes me feel much better about the mistakes I make.

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Eric,

I concur with n5wd. I didn't have any thoughts about this picture. Perhaps take the picture from a lower level instead of top down. Your work is good however.

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Thanks for taking the time to comment on my image. I purposely put one up I knew wasn't perfect, but it was new, and I had mixed feelings about it, and to me, thosed are the best images to put up in front of others. Any of us can post a perfect image and smile when we say lots of attaboys, pats on the back and "way to go" s.

Thanks again for the critiques. I wish they put this critique forum up a long time ago.
 
 
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It's too confusing? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/ooo.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
 
 
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