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Another of Mariam
Old 06-19-2005, 09:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Another couple from the series I did with Mariam this past week.

The first was the head shot she was in for.
Standard portrait stuff.

The 2nd was a little more fashion or Glamour style but still a head shot.

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Old 06-19-2005, 11:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Pretty girl, nice lighting and overall a good portrait. The second shot looks a little soft in focus but my guess would be that it was intentional for this picture.



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Re: Another of Mariam
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Thanks Jim, and you are right it was intentional. Your Portfolio looks great.

Learning this PS stuff is killing this old man. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/crazy.gif[/img]

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Re: Another of Mariam
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These are fine photoraphs but you I think you have stopped short of finishing them to thier potential. Persoanly I think both images suffer form excessive shadowing from the nose and the cheek but that is a matter of preference. Try using PS to add a little fill flash - then increase color saturation and I would suggest you may wish to highlight the beautiful eye color by enhancing selecting the iris and adding a bit of green and or brighten them. Increasing the saturation in this image will bring it to life and the fill flash is not a manditory change it is my preference.

Don't get me wrong shadow has its place and not all eyes should be brightened

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If it is of any help to you, one of the best things that helped me with Photoshop was buying a book by Scott Kelby called "Classic Photoshop Effects"
in addition to going to a photo seminar where they taught some PS tricks after the photo shoot.
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