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Amber in Laguna Beach
Old 06-17-2005, 11:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Ok, please let me know how I could improve on this.
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Re: Amber in Laguna Beach
Old 06-17-2005, 11:54 AM   #2 (permalink)
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one thing I noticed right away....her blouse,lingerie..whatever seems more in focus than her eyes and face...
that would be a starting point.
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The focus is a big problem for me as well. Aside from that, I am not diggin the pose at all. The rest of the pluses or minuses dont mean alot when the pose doesnt look good to me. Maybe if you had her drop her chin. It is just a personal opinion so dont take it personal.

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Re: Amber in Laguna Beach
Old 06-17-2005, 03:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Just a few things:

1) Image looks a bit tint of green. Add a bit of magenta.
2) Fill light from below or horizontal. My guess is that it was an overcast sky. This would make things facing up hotter than the flip side.
3) Square the shoulders a bit. However, that may not be a good pose if the head is tilted up.
4) The plant pottery is a little busy.
5) Smooth the left cheek a bit. Use a healing brush.

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