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First Swimsuit - Comments?
Old 06-17-2005, 10:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Again from my work with Jenn earlier this week. What a great girl to work with.

Ok, comments & suggestions are most welcome here on my first effort with swimsuit.









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Old 06-17-2005, 11:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Image 1 & 3, She has so much of a lean in her arm, the pressure is causing the "unflattering bulge" in her upper bicep area (which I used to do all the time) [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/ooo.gif[/img] Image 1, maybe photoshop a teeny-tiny bit on the left side of her waist -just enough to streamline her instead of have that little bit of hangover. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] Image 4 she has such a "twist" going on that it's causing her to have a back skin fold (I was guilty of that too). [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

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Re: First Swimsuit - Comments?
Old 06-17-2005, 11:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Greg all the images except #2 are problems I've delt with and are still dealing with..the bulge in the arm comes natural from the muscle holding all the weight...so to get rid of this problem your going to have to shift her center of gravity... I think the first one would have been a better pose had she been on her back and all stretched out..the third one could have been avoided by having her left hand moved forward and shift her center to her left hip"buttock" so she wasnt supporting herself on her hand....
the fourth one...thats still an issue Im dealing with...the way I deal with it...is just not shoot it..!
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The problems have all been pointed out I think by Don and Reese. Model is very attractive and I would vote for a reshoot and watch the details. Not bad for the first swimsuit shoot. Keep on shooting.

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Re: First Swimsuit - Comments?
Old 06-17-2005, 01:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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1. I like the composition. I don't like the amputee arm appearance.

2. I don't see a purpose. If it's just a shot, put some light in there and light it up.

3. You have some leading lines you could play with more in your composition. Overcast day, you still have to pump in some more light. I think that is what you are really missing over all, is needing more light on the subject.

4. Ah, the sun came out.....dappled light emphasizes an area. If its' your purpose, fine, and the moment she looks on camera, a reflector popping her from the front would have helped give the image some dynamics.

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