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Old 06-15-2005, 07:57 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's another from my sort of fashion shoot, I'd luv to hear what you think [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]



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Re: Please critique...
Old 06-15-2005, 08:13 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm certainly no expert here, but I'd say you pretty much have it. You might want to crop it a little more to camera left to get her whole hand in the frame, but I may be dead wrong on that. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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Old 06-15-2005, 11:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Do I like it? or don't I like it? hmm... Do I like it??? Don't I like it... Hmm... I like it! I like it! I really like it... Looks like you nixed part of her right hand though... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] but it's still "suppa-hot."
 
 
Re: Please critique...
Old 06-15-2005, 12:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ed,

OK.. first, you've got a very easy-to-look at image that's pleasing to the eye.

That said, generally a fashion shot puts the emphasis on the fashions. I don't see that, here... is your focus on the pants, the necklace(s), or the suspenders? It's not clear to me, and that makes the purpose of the image ambiguous.

The posing of the model is such that we get a clear shot up her nostrils... and with her head tilted up like that, her eyes are half-closed to look down at the lens.. doesn't work for me. Dropping her chin down would have been much more effective, IMHO.

The rim lighting is effective if that's what you're wanting. Might need a bit more headlight on her left side to separate her dark hair from the background... doesn't seem to be as much a problem on the right side of her head.

Cropping is odd... was cutting off the top of her head and her right hand what you wanted to do?

You've got the basics of a really killer image going here... tweaking her gaze, the cropping, and such would have made it a very effective glamour image of her... to get it into the fashion mode, ya gotta be selling something, and that's just not happening, here.

Hang in there and keep shooting, ed!


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Re: Please critique...
Old 06-15-2005, 01:00 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I dig it, and the last one, too. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] (I totally dig that bulldog cane! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]) Keep in mind I'm no, um, fashion person? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] But I do like how everything's coordinated with black or white. The crop? Hmm, I honestly can't tell if it bothers me or not that the top of her head and part of her right side bothers me or not, but you know what? I find that I keep looking at the image longer trying to figure it out, and isn't that alone a sign of a successful image? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] I was actually considering a similar sort of crop for some images I'll be doing soon, so.... I guess that means it works for me. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Old 06-15-2005, 01:21 PM   #6 (permalink)
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"I dig it too." [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
 
 
Re: Yeah baby....
Old 06-15-2005, 01:48 PM   #7 (permalink)
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"I just got one question... Where is my pimp cane?" [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

Pimpin' ain't easy! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Old 06-15-2005, 07:54 PM   #8 (permalink)
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i love this shot. no real critique cos im not too sure what im talking about! just reminds me of droogies from a clockwork orange!
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Old 06-16-2005, 07:10 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Overall I like the shot, but I think the highlight is a little blown on the rim lighting and I would have liked to see the shadow on her left eye eliminated a little.

Good job overall, though.

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Old 06-16-2005, 11:07 AM   #10 (permalink)
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I think the kicker is too strong and I question the placement of the face in the composition. Left hand looks a bit awkward. Cropping the right hand disturbs me. I like the shot. I'd just really like the face on thirds to make it more powerful.
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