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New shot, tell me what you think
Old 06-14-2005, 08:04 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Shot again this weekend, three models. It was a good time. The last model was six hours late (which was ok, because she was the last one to be shot, so it meant I waited a entire half hour for her, you know, setup change time) and her boyfriend, who was her ride, felt bad so he bought me a bottle of wine while I was shooting. And I hear so many people talk about how they don't allow significant others.


Anyway, Tell me what you think of this shot, more to come....much more.


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Old 06-14-2005, 08:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the composition, nice movement through the frame. Nice diagonals. My eye finds a lot of things to explore. Her lips really stand out against an otherwise neutral color pallete without overpowering the shot. There's detail in the shadows, and yet the shadows aren't weak. I also like the use of selective focus to keep just her eyes, nose, and lips in focus, while letting the side of her face, jewelry, and top (tank top?) go soft. The only thing that I find distracting is the shadow cutting through the center of her right eye. Not a minor point, but nowhere near catastrophic either. This is what I'd call a "near miss".



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Re: New shot, tell me what you think
Old 06-16-2005, 12:43 PM   #3 (permalink)
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A little too sharp for my taste. You can see the pores of her skin which is usually not what glamour is about. There is a slight crease on her neck that could have been avoided by a slight change of the pose. The cropping is a little severe in my view and tends to give emphasis to the armpit which is not where you want the emphasis of a glamour shot.



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