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Critique please -- A lot different than my last post
Old 06-08-2005, 07:32 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Critique please -- A lot different than my last post
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It looks way over sharpened and blown out. The eyes look way over processed. I can see a lot of artifacts (spelling) below the eyes and around the eyebrows. I would also have moved the model away from the background. Very pretty model!
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Re: Critique please -- A lot different than my last post
Old 06-08-2005, 09:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with with steve, over sharppend in some spots, move away from the backdrop some to help blur it out. Go with a strapless top as well next time, the straps add nothing to the photo. Other than that when are you comming to South Carolina for a shoot? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

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Re: Critique please -- A lot different than my last post
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Previous comments certainly correct. Straps (IMO) could be 'suggestive' element but not as in the image posted. "Round shouldered" pose not to my liking, but that's a personal thing.

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Re: Critique please -- A lot different than my last post
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Hi all thatnk you for the comments --The light color was my white shinny make-up I used --Here is the original before I sharpened is this better? --Thanks Paula


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Re: Critique please -- A lot different than my last post
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Thanks --I posted the original before I sharpened it -- I live in NY and don't think I'll get down to SC --Thanks for the comments! -_Paula


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Here is what I notice that could be improved upon. There are creases and what looks like a fold in the material behind you, plus it would appear that the shot was done with a camera flash. Try the same shot with a better background and some type of studio lights to help create some shape with light and shading.

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