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Kristen experiment ...
Old 06-07-2005, 03:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here is a photo of Kristen from the RG workshop in Dallas. We photographed Kristen on a background with a fake window in it, but no scene in the window. I am experimenting in this photo with having Kristen look in the window. What do you thing?



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Great concept
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Well executed...

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Re: Kristen experiment ...
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looks like you could trim the edges a little more in the far right panes, but that's a nit pick. I think it's an cool idea and well done.

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Shades of the 50-foot woman looking in through the window! Nice idea, but the difference in proportion bothers me a little. Maybe if you had a shot of Kristen looking around a corner to incorporate into the window -- kind of like she's sneaking a peak at herself being photographed, it might have more impact.

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That would be a good idea, but I didn't have this effect in mind when I was shooting the original images, so didn't have the ideal photo to paste in. I would like to have had one where she wasn't looking at the camera, so it would look like she was looking at herself. But I didn't have one photo of her in the sessions where she wasn't looking at the camera.
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Roger... neat effect! KK mentioned the proportion and you mentioned the direction she was looking, so I won't repeat. The other thing that bothers me is the opacity/richness of the window image... I think that maybe that was toned down a bit too much.

We'll just have to get Kristen to come up to the studio so you can re-shoot her!

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It would be nice to get her down here for a shoot.
I was trying to make it look like there was glass in the window and I'm having trouble getting the exact look I need. Here is another version:



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