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Taken awhile back
Old 06-07-2005, 01:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Took this shot probably about a year ago. Finally got down to finishing it up. First time I ever tried anything like this. Your comments appreciated.

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Re: Taken awhile back
Old 06-07-2005, 02:54 PM   #2 (permalink)
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So is this the pivotal image that gave you your website name? Because it has a distracting "shadowline" across her face. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

Her chin and lips being hotter than the rest of her face makes her lips look almost like the joker, somewhat distracting.

I would have moved the light but that's just me, all in all not bad.



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Re: Taken awhile back
Old 06-07-2005, 03:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks, I really see what you mean about the joker look. Gotta watch out for that. Still not sure if I like the shadow from the hair on the face. With all that in mind, would this have worked better if model had mouth closed, and a more serious look?

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Re: Taken awhile back
Old 06-07-2005, 04:09 PM   #4 (permalink)
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To me no. I like the way it looks as if she has just turned and is happy to see me, and she is happy with herself. The lighting is the issue not the look.

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Re: Taken awhile back
Old 06-07-2005, 04:37 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks, here is one taken at the same shoot, that is more in the style I usually work. Sometimes you gotts try to reach a little farther. I will keep working on it.

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I like this one mucho bedda.
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