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My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-06-2005, 10:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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While I like to look at girls in swimsuits (and out of swimsuits, etc) I don't really have that much interest in taking pictures of girls in swimsuits for whatever reason. I don't think I've ever taken a picture of anybody in a swimsuit except my daughter. But this model had several swimsuits she wanted pics in, it was a hot day, and I figured, "What the Hell?" They're a bit cliche-ish, but cliches are cliches because they've stood the test of time. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

These are the first two I've edited:





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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-07-2005, 07:25 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi StMarc,

I like both of them. I like the first one but find the building distracting. #2 is more fun. Nice Job.

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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-07-2005, 07:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Oops...Forgot Photo.

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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-07-2005, 08:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you. I went back and forth about the building. I thought about just cloning it out, but I decided I like it balancing the model, although I wish it was a little sharper.

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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-08-2005, 07:43 AM   #5 (permalink)
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The building doesn't really bother me although I wish it was either a little thicker clearer or maybe even more blurry --I'm not sure what would work the best --maybe playing around with it some and you'll get the best picture. I think it's great work and I love the second shot! She has a lot of personality --always helpfull!! Paula
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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-08-2005, 12:00 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I also find the building distracting in the first image, and would definitely clone it out if it was my image. Even if blurred more, I think it would still distract me. But I really prefer a clean and simple background in most images anyway.

The second one is great, and wouldn't need to touch it at all. If we had to find something to change, it would be to lighten up the dark water tower. But its probably not worth the trouble. I like it as is!

Being new around here, I get the feeling if we comment on images, we should attach an image. If thats the case, here's mine.

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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
Old 06-08-2005, 02:40 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Bro that image is fantastic!

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Re: My First Swimsuit Shots
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Thanks Mike. Coming from you thats a great compliment.
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... if you have images in your GG portfolio, that is considered "having images" for purposes of being allowed to comment on others' pics.

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Old 06-08-2005, 05:19 PM   #10 (permalink)
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You're welcome. I just can't stop staring!

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