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Sondra D for Stare (at least I hope)
Old 06-04-2005, 06:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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It's been a while since I asked for a critique, but that doesn't mean that I don't think I need them still. These images of Sondra D were shot at the Goodbread House Bed & Breakfast in St Marys, GA this morning. MU by Faythe Hall-Mesic.

Please honest and constructive criticism.

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Re: Sondra D for Stare (at least I hope)
Old 06-04-2005, 07:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Cropping and hand position always a personal choice, and rules are made to be broken. Some rules say show the edge and not the back of a woman's hand, don't chop off fingers in a crop. Image number 2 has cut some fingers off and the back of the right hand is displayed rather than an edge. Her pendant seems to be defying gravity - and why not arch her a bit more so we could Stare at more than her face? Hair on the left could be groomed so background white doesn't show through. Eyes generally travel to the brightest part of an image (one way to not be distracted by the model is to turn the image upside down - the lightest part of the image will jump out at you)- in image #2 the blown out blurred background above her right shoulder is the brightest part of that image - a little dodging might help there. I'm nitpicking, but the devil is in the details - beautiful model, subtle make-up, and nice images overall!

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