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Old 05-27-2005, 02:44 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What is this lacking, needing, etc?
(Ever think, after doing your hair in a certain way, and putting on a pair of shorts that are way to TIGHT, that you ruined some thing and they will never recover?)

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Old 05-27-2005, 03:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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If mine are too tight I would definitely ruin something. But since you asked for professionalism ... I like the image. The splayed fingers draw a lot of attention to the center of interest. I like the mix of cool and warm colors..
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Old 05-27-2005, 03:19 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi,
Glad your back! I like almost everything about this image except the two different colors on her hair. Can you make it all one color? I like the blue side better. JMO

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Old 05-27-2005, 03:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I would like to see this one without the colored gels...they dont seem to be controlled very well in this image...and Im sure no expert on that...just the red spot in the hair...is distracting...and just a slight twist of the hips would give it a touch more impact...seems too straight on to me.
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Old 05-27-2005, 03:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I agree with the others that the red in the hair is a bit distracting.

I like the image.
Can you go a little more 80's next time? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Old 05-27-2005, 04:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I like it... I think if you cropped just a touch off the top to remove the red light on the hair it'd be even better.

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Old 05-27-2005, 08:43 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Here's what I like about the image.

The textures or the jacket and the stockings.
The lines on the bottom of the shorts, in the hands.
The slightly off center composition.
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Old 05-27-2005, 08:50 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hi,
I think it looks great! Maybe cut off shorts would have given it more of a bang? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Now THAT's how advice should be given.
No personal attacks, just professional opinions.(for the most part hehe)
Thanks everyone,

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Old 05-28-2005, 08:15 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Hi Marty

ok heres what I see and would change.
1. Loose the gels
2. Tighter jeans, they look a little too loose for this pose, especially at the cuffs.
3. Jacket at wrist is pulled up on the right hand and down on the other.
4. Stockings if more evenly pulled to approx same height.
5. Again, I think Don mentioned it, I would turn hips slightly.

I know these are all nit picks and may only be me. I like the idea. We are all learning including myself.

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