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Old 05-27-2005, 02:16 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Finishing up my edits from my shoot with Jenn, I came across a couple more.

The first was another where I used the Force rather than setting up a shot beforehand. We took this as she was doing some makeup touchups.

I like it. What could be improved?


And here's another.

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Old 05-27-2005, 03:27 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the unposed poses. Very natural. I would just change the angle of the light a bit. Number 1 is broad light and short light would flatter her face more. Number 2 has too strong a kicker and no modeling of the face and body. Kicker spilling on to the nose bothers me. If these are in a tight area like a dressing room, you can usually just bounce a light into a corner and get a flattering light with good direction.
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Re: More Jenn
Old 05-27-2005, 03:34 PM   #3 (permalink)
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OOOOOOO you cut off the hand at mid forearm!! Im telling!!!!
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Re: More Jenn
Old 05-27-2005, 04:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I thought I replied to this one but I guess i'm loosing my mind..try this again...

Pic #1 I think the dress in the closet (left of her head) and the molding from the closet (I guess thats what that black line coming from the top of the pic to her head is) are a bit distracting. In pic #2 her eyes and hair color are a bit too close to the colored spots in the couch (I don't like spots today for some reason) so she seems muted.

Just my 2 cents.

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Re: More Jenn
Old 05-31-2005, 08:50 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback. I need to work on tight spaces more, especially in impromptu situations like this one.
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Old 05-31-2005, 08:51 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Good feedback. Now that you point it out, I can't remember what that black line was from. This room had two opposing mirrors and I think I shot this one through one mirror with the other in the background (to stretch more space out of the room), but I am not sure. It could be anywhere.
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