First I don't like the lighting for this pose and am not even sure of the jacket thingy. The good part I like is the experimenting with light to see what it does. This lighting will work with some poses and now you see what it does or does not do.
By posting it shows others as well. I do this sort of thing all the time to see what if. The effect of the hir light is good if it were a little higher but then you wouldn't get the back lit for jacket. The backlit of jacket is good if it was a sheer fabric nude image in a different pose.
Some may even like this image, its all a selective sort of thing.
Thanks for showing and I always learn from these posts.
Natural window light with a gold reflector