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Old 05-24-2005, 10:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I am very new to glamour and finally got up the nerve to post one of my photographs. The following was taken at the March GG Philly workshop so I cannot take credit for the set or lighting. The model was Karrah and she was just fantastic. A true pleasure to work with and very patient with a first timer such as myself. The makeup artist was Sarah Lott who was also great.






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Re: Long Time Lurker . . . First Time Photo Poster
Old 05-24-2005, 11:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Great shot for a first timer. Heck that's a great shot for 5oth timer.
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I like the set up and lighting, my only problem with it is her pose and expression. The angle of her head doesn't look natural and she has no expression on her face. At first I thought you took the shot before she was ready. Keep shooting/posting!



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Excelent first post.
Beats my last post....

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Thank you very much.

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Steve,
Thank you very much for the feedback. I did not notice the neck position until you mentioned it and I can see what you are referring to. As for the expression, I guess I got so caught up in her eyes that I did not think about her expression as a whole. I am still undecided about how I feel about her expression, but you have definitely given me cause to reevaluate. Thank you again for your critique and encouragement.

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My Take? Im thinking of her purring like kitten ...in the pose..I think the pose works..would have liked to seen an expression....PURRRRRRRR....then this image would have rocked!!!..
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Jackell,

Thank you very much. I really enjoyed your paintball photographs with Tasha.

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Don,

Thanks for the feedback. Karrah was a pleasure to work with and had a defenite presence.

BTW, the image you posted in you reply is, in my opinion, one of the best that you have submitted to date. I also like the b&w photograph on the portraits page of your website.

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I share the thoughts mentioned about the pose and expression. If her head were up just a bit, it would continue the line of the curve of her back. Glad you quit lurking. Enjoyed the image.
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