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Aviana
Old 05-24-2005, 07:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think of this one.



I think I should have worked on the head and left arm before I shot.
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Old 05-24-2005, 11:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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a few things bother me about this image.

first and foremost, the glare on the guitar. it directs the eye immediately to it.

second, the odd way her left arm is bent around the neck of the guitar

third, her upper body is less exposed than her legs and feet.

fourth, the pose coupled with the low angle makes her whole body seem out of proportion.

and fifth, she seems way too close to the backdrop.



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Old 05-24-2005, 04:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Ahhh... Brooke in Blue... my favorite model [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

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Re: Aviana
Old 05-24-2005, 06:35 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Well thanks for the feedback. I agree with your points. Regarding the backdrop, space is at minimum right now. What about this, a more traditional angle hands are a little better, guitar strap is anoying.



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Old 05-24-2005, 08:46 PM   #5 (permalink)
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is the face of that guitar white or metallic? cuz either the glare is too eye-catching (which would require some angling of the guitar for it to not be so reflective) or the white is and, if it's the white, i'm thinking about the only thing you could have done was not have the model in a black outfit. the guitar strap doesn't particularly bother me. had you not called attention to it i don't think i would've noticed.

and yeah, i prefer this angle, tho you kind'a cut her feet in a weird place. much prettier girl than i thought she was in the first image. i empathize with your "space is at (a) minimum" factor. makes lots of things difficult.
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Old 05-24-2005, 09:16 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I really do appreaciate your comments. The guitar is some sort of metalic blue. Later we switched to a gloss black one, but mostly head shots with the neck. Those two didn't have any touch up, maybe I can get rid of the glare in photoshop. She is pretty, I just thought the first shot had some sort of drama, but I should of posed the head and arm.

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