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How about this (last) one. No.5
Old 05-16-2005, 02:30 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Jason... next time it'll be vertical [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]



There is a similar one here.

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Re: How about this (last) one. No.5
Old 05-16-2005, 09:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The trellis is very distracting. Frame her in it next time.
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Re: How about this (last) one. No.5
Old 05-16-2005, 10:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Thomas,

Something like this? I didn't want to post this because of the shadow on her face.



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Re: How about this (last) one. No.5
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I think that is a much better composition. I'd like to see the trellis cover the whole frame. Also, it would be better either perfectly horizontal and vertical or tilted much more. Slightly tilted looks like a mistake. Same with the shadow on the face. No shadow or a heavy one would be fine. A soft one looks like a mistake. I do like this image much better. My $.02.
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