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Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 01:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Go as hard on me as you want. Thick skin here. Model is Jordan. Her first shoot actually.
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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 03:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome to GG! The photo is very nice. I guess there's the obvious finger cut-off, but I like the lighting myself.

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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 04:09 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Its Nice.
I would do it with 2 lights and have the eye highlight in the 2 o clock position.
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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 04:28 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Thank you Greg.
El- Thank you for the tip! If I did that would'nt it change my lighting? If I put the catch light higher in the 2 o'clock, it would spill on to her hair right? Scrim/snoot? What are thinking here? How would you have lit her?
I know we always try for the 11 or 1 o'clock.
What do you think? And why?
Thanks for the critique I respect your work.
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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 05:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I like the image, but it seems a little soft too me. Don't know if that is digital soft, or if you intentionally softened.

I like the colors and lighting.

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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 05:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks.... I soften it a bit....maybe too much for posting. Did not soften the eyes......eyes are sharp on my end. I will keep that in mind. Thanks RDavis!
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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
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11 or 1 highlight was just too much for pose. Thus 2 oclock.
You could keep the key to the left add spot to right for the eye hightlight
and maybe fill at camera plane. Or just fill with light from it in eyes.
Left key raised for hair would eliminate the under horizon eye hightlight.
Seen some "weird" eye catchlights on GG (ESP 2 or differ shapes).
Maybe the people here only see TPA.
Yours is kool and its nice just suggest more attention to the eye catchlight.
Nice Model.
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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-16-2005, 05:25 PM   #8 (permalink)
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RIGHT On!!!! Now Thats a CRITIQUE!!! Its easy to give your opinion, but to tell why....Now I see where you are coming from. (RESPECT)
First time she has ever, ever posed. She was a wallflower at a shoot this weekend.
Thanks EL,
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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-17-2005, 01:17 AM   #9 (permalink)
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I like the image but one thing is really distracting me.. I guess in would be her um, left hand that is squished in the inside of her elbow. I dont know. It just looks really uncomfortable and funky.

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Re: Found You Guys.....Out of Retirement...a little Rusty
Old 05-17-2005, 01:38 AM   #10 (permalink)
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This Is why I like you guys......More eyes to see things with. I never saw that and this was her first time ever. Another thing to watch for. Thanks Hailey.
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