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Old 05-12-2005, 02:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Ever have one of those days where you just weren't feeling it?
I was jazzed about doing this shoot until
A) They insisted on shooting mid-day.
B) showed up with an unwashed car.
But hopefully this was salvagable....opinions?

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Old 05-12-2005, 02:58 PM   #2 (permalink)
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ok...middle of the day and a dirty car, that takes care of several of the problems with the shot.... Who do we blame for the pose? I am not diggin the head down thing here and her belly is pushed out a bit. Most problems for me with this shot could be fixed to some extent but that head down thing just doesnt work for me at all.

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Old 05-12-2005, 03:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I put it up. I'll take the blame for both.
I can't say it was my best effort. we were trying to at least get something close to even light on her face.

She picked out this one but to me it looks like she's got somthing in her mouth.

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Old 05-12-2005, 03:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I like this one better. A little bit of editing and I think it will be even better.

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Old 05-12-2005, 03:34 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I'm with Scott on the pose. She's a pretty girl but I would like to see her stretched up a little more..she almost looks like she is crouching a little. She needs to stand tall, shoulders back, and tummy in. I'm also bothered by her hand placement on the car and on her side. The shadows distract me as well. I keep looking at it..wishing I was there so I could help out. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

The second image you posted under Scott is much more flattering to her body. I think you both did a nice job on it, especially with the obstacles you had to deal with.

Just my opinions, I'm not an expert, so take it or leave it!!

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the other guys touched on posing and daylight/color temp. how about lens selection. it looks like you shoot with a wide angle 35-50mm maybe. just a guess. try this same setup with a telephoto, maybe at 200mm see what that does for this shoot.

i shoot some cars a few times and mid-day. best if you can scout out a location where there is some grass or a field, find some shade. partial shade anything that isnt direct light. get rid of the pavement in the shot. if you have to do pavement try shooting just after a rain so the road is wet. shoot in the the shade and bring a fill flash, maybe 1 on-camera and 1 slave.

im digging the 96' cobra, not a big fan of the import taillights but hey. little dirty but so is my 96 cobra production number #2394.
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Is that Kimberly??? Ohhhh how cute!!!! I LOVE this image. It just makes me smile!

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It sure is Kimberly and she suffered for that shot. The wind was terrible and blowing sand in her eyes...That poor girl had to stop and close her eyes every few minutes. Here is another from the same spot. Gotta love the lake bed.

Supershoot Events ROCK!

How ya been Kelly? I havent talked to you in forever it seems.

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Anything you say he better take...Get real girl. LOL
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I wish you where here too.
Please feel free to offer your opinion any time.
he more of those I can get the more and the faster I'll learn.
Thanks,
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