I'm with Scott on the pose. She's a pretty girl but I would like to see her stretched up a little more..she almost looks like she is crouching a little. She needs to stand tall, shoulders back, and tummy in. I'm also bothered by her hand placement on the car and on her side. The shadows distract me as well. I keep looking at it..wishing I was there so I could help out. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]
The second image you posted under Scott is much more flattering to her body. I think you both did a nice job on it, especially with the obstacles you had to deal with.
Just my opinions, I'm not an expert, so take it or leave it!!