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Old 05-10-2005, 05:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Any comments on this one? I took this about a week or so ago. It was a fun shoot with a great model.



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Re: back to school
Old 05-10-2005, 06:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey Weave nice image...Now here goes my critique...look closely at her feet.
the way you blew out the rest of the background with photoshop makes her feet look deformed...I think I would have left the folds and shadows on there.
Blowing out all the shadows on the ground makes the subject look like shes floating.
 
 
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Please pardon my saying so, but it doesn't seem very inspired.
With the possible exception of a little bit of blowout I don't believe there's anything seriously wrong with the photo. But it just doesn't seem to have any impact on me.
There are others in your portfolio I like much better.
J.D.
P.S. There are also several in my portfolio I like much less if that helps at all.
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Actually I didn’t use Photoshop for the background. I set up 2 lights on the backdrop and overexposed it by 2 stops. (I know that was too much but wanted to try it anyway) the feet are probably that way from the reflection of being over exposed.

Thanks for the comment I probably wouldn’t have caught that!!!

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You've got a little spill on her face. See that shadow and then bright spot on her left cheek. Not flattering. It can be a PS fix. In the future you could either bring her more forward, or be sure the lights are pointed at the background using barndoors.

Other than that, nice shot.

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