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My 100th post.. and some pictures
Old 05-08-2005, 07:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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For your comments, critiques, advises, ... anything [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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Re: My 100th post.. and some pictures
Old 05-08-2005, 07:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I have got to get outdoors more!!
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Re: My 100th post.. and some pictures
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You need to get some light into her eyes. In the first two, she has just two black holes instead of eyes. The eyes are the windows to the soul and in photography, typically, if the eyes are not in focus or visible, then the whole image will appear lacking and/or out of focus (given this type of overhead sunlight lighting her). A reflector will be your best friend in open sunlight or, better yet, look for open shade and get some light into her eye sockets. The third one is nice and there is more light in her eyes. The only thing that bothers me about this particular image is her placement. While her body is in the left 1/3rd of the image, her head and eyes are smack dab in the middle and make the image very static. If you crop it so that the edge is much closer to her right arm, she'll be at the left-most part of the image and the tilting of her head will be toward the middle of the frame and draw the viewer in more.

Just my .02 for what it's worth. She has a beautiful smile. Please post some more of her!

Thanks for sharing!

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How we solved the \"dark eyes\" problem...
Old 05-08-2005, 08:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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[img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]



Just kidding.. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img]

I agree Mike. I didn't carry a reflector (big mistake - ?) for this shoot. Last one in the main series was taken with fill-in flash. Will try to do better next time. Thanks for advise/comments.
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More of her...
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Can be found here:

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Comments are welcome for those as well!
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Re: My 100th post.. and some pictures
Old 05-09-2005, 06:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Here is the cropped one of the third photo.
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Sorry guys, if you can't see the images by clicking on links above, that's becuase my web hosting service has problems (server down). Until they fix it, here is another one to continue the series

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I lost count of my posts. BUT
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You've got all the things you need to make a super nice pic.
Now you just need to manipulate them to get a better result in your first two pics. The third pic is a wonderful pic and I love it.

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Old 05-11-2005, 04:00 PM   #9 (permalink)
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It might help if you metered for her face. they are all a bit underexposed.

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Re: My 100th post.. and some pictures
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I would say they are static. Some advice would be "if it bends, bend it - if it's stratit tilt it." My favorite is the stairway image - but have her leaning from one side to the other. Some lighting help would be to get the main light into both eyes. The time of day is wrong here. No sweet light. Go to a porch or under the overhang of a tree to lose the racoon eyes. Hope that helps.
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