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Jamille #3 (SN)
Old 05-05-2005, 05:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Ok, last in this part of the series (I promise). I have more from other parts that I'll post later.

I really appreciate all the advice I've gotten so far. I'm learning a lot.

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Old 05-05-2005, 09:03 AM   #2 (permalink)
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She is not either SN, you big tease. She's practically dressed. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

Best of the bunch so far. First thing that jumps out at me is some perspective distortion: I doubt her feet are really that big. This is something you're going to get shooting close up at certain angles and with certain lenses. It's why you see people shooting closeups with 200mm lenses. Lots of good advice in books and articles on why this happens and what to do about it.

I like what you've done with the sheet much better in this image. It still looks a little odd at the flared end but now it looks deliberate without being forced. Her fingertips shouldn't be poking out from behind her left leg: either show the whole arm (preferred) or cut it off somewhere clean. (Gosh, that sounds graphic, doesn't it?) Her left hand looks a little awkward, I might have tried to arrange it a little more smoothly.

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Doh! I misunderstood that designation *red faced*. Man, what an idiot I can be sometimes.

Thanks again for the in-depth critique. As for the perspective distortion, I was in pretty cramped quarters for this part of the session. I was back as far as I could go, so a 200mm would have been unable to capture all of her. Any suggestions for fighting it in cramped quarters (I guess I could avoid the angle).

I liked this room and want to try again in there. Unfortunately, it was too dark (in my opinion) with just available light (noise city). The mirrors were cool and I hope they added something.

Here's one we did with the mirror.

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