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Old 05-03-2005, 08:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Do you like it, or not? How to improve?
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Old 05-03-2005, 08:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like them all. The shadows in #2 are distracting and her face seems a lttle washed, but otherwise excellent.


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Old 05-03-2005, 10:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like the first one. The colors and play of texture is great. I think she needs to take a breath though and flatten her stomach. You could also be real creative and clean it up with Photoshop, but I would try enhancing the pose next time. The enlarged abdomen is a result of the beautifal back arch she has.

Number two has way too much shadow which is making her disappear. A soft gold or even a white reflector would dampen the shadows and give her more emphasis, and finally remove the contrast from her face. Great pose, maybe just a few more degrees of forward angle of her legs to add some shape to her glutes and add some angles to the composition

Not that number three is bad, but I would prefer to see her eyes--just my personal preference, the rest is great.

So, to answer your question about how to improve, get a reflector and work on details of the poses. Otherwise very, very nice work.
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Old 05-03-2005, 03:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Nice, nice. Sometihng's different about the color in #2, but I like it. I don't like the light coming across her waist all by itself. Overall, nice set.

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I LOVE the first one.. the warm skin, the cold blue metal, the wall with a pattern... everything is A++. The second one is nice, but the shadows are distracting and the model gets lost in this image. Number three is nice, but doesn't have the impact of number one. Also (being picky here), watch out for the belly hanging out from the jacket on number three. Good stuff!!

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