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Old 05-03-2005, 06:29 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Denea is a sweetheart. She was very easy to work with and we both had fun.

My first session with a model. How can I make it better?





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Re: Denae
Old 05-03-2005, 08:02 AM   #2 (permalink)
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1. The very first thing I noticed was her somber mood. She has a natural scowl so through communication you can direct her to put a small grin and still keep her serious. The light bouncing off the rocks gives your light on her face but you have to look at the suttle shadow that is distracting coming from her nose. If you are going to include hands for a typical portrait pose then a stair step with her fingers will flow better.

2. Get her to laugh and open up a little more. Put her in a lifestyle moment.

3. Probably could crop tighter. Lifting her chin up just a tad would reduce the eyes starting to grow up into her head syndrome.

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Old 05-03-2005, 08:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks a million for taking the time, JT. Good suggestions. Man, I didn't see the nose shadow until you mentioned it. Good eyes.

What do you mean by "stair step" with the fingers?
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Quick example. Not exactly what I am talking about when you fold the front part of the fingers to the cheek but you might get the idea of what I am talking about with this example....

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Old 05-03-2005, 03:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Oh, ok. I see now. Thanks for the follow-up. You're the best!

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Old 05-03-2005, 03:43 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Watch for flyaways (hair). Expose for her, not the scene. #2 is the best. I would have liked a tighter crop and her looking more into camera.

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