Critique My Attempt at Fashion

[Foto_Highway]

Last week I posted a thread for suggestions on shooting fashion. Some of the tips I got were:

1. looking away from a the camera
2. looking at the camera with attitude
3. using magazines for ideas
4. telling the model I want a fashion look, not "sexy eyes"
5. using a stylist..(I had to be the stylest) but Reese did make-up
6. Im sure I got more...but cant remember

So, I guess you can tell me how I did. The model is Chanti from Richmond, VA
She can be found here on GG. Feel free to add to these tips. Thanx!

Well, I am sold on the pink for sure... I may run out and buy a pink wig right now... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img] I think the photos look pretty darn hot...

[jford]

I'm hardly qualified to critic anyone's fashion shots - but I do seem to recall Christian, Chung, Eric, Rick, or someone of that ilk once remarking, "It's gotta be all about the clothes."

MAYBE the first, "God Forgive Me" shot - MAYBE the first or second pink wigged shot - but these all seem to me more about the girl than the clothes. Pretty girl, too. Third and sixth are quite good shots, but fashion? I don't know - but they're quite good, whatever they are.

[Foto_Highway]

Thanks...I did bring up those questions and asked for advice as to how to shoot for the clothes...gues I still dont know...Back to the drawing board.

And thanks, for the compliment.