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Old 05-01-2005, 03:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I've been working figure studies for awhile but this is the first glamour. Please give me your honest critiques. Thanks Robert




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Re: First Glamour - Request Hard Critiques
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In my honest opinion it looks good to me. the crop, exposure, models expression all come together to pull this one off.. Congrats



My daughter took this photo....
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IT SUCKS!!!!...
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that I didn't take the photo [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

I would like to see the eyes more in focus. It appears the focal point was her lips or even the neck below the chin. I think if the eyes were sharper this image would be VERY nice...

Grat job, and beautiful model...send her to Houston... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]

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Re: First Glamour - Request Hard Critiques
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Dwayne...I had some glasses like that...but my optomotrist made me take em back when my eyes got "undialated"... [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]
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Holleee cow. . .
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You want me to critique THAT??? Yeah right. If I can drag myself away from that face. . . those eyes. . . forget the critique who is the Hon. . . Chi. . . Swee. . . Hurummp. The fine looking young lady?
I guess if I were to be nit picky the sun splash on her shoul. . . by those eyes. . .
Er. what was I saying? Oh yeah heres a picture of me . . ."DISCERNING".

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Re: First Glamour - Request Hard Critiques
Old 05-01-2005, 07:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks for the feedback. This was created at one of Rolando's San Antonio workshops.
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Re: First Glamour - Request Hard Critiques
Old 05-01-2005, 07:37 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I could see is maybe a little more saturation and perhaps bumping up your strobes just a tad to lower the contrast of the window light thru the shades, I think it distracts your attention from her face a small amount. Perhaps retouch out the strand in the lower left of her hair. And perhaps try burning down the part of her hair it by the backlight.

But most of this is personal preference and I dont see anything really wrong with the image.

Hope this helps,

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Re: First Glamour - Request Hard Critiques
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Honest opinion... this one is awsome!
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Re: First Glamour - Request Hard Critiques
Old 05-02-2005, 12:38 AM   #9 (permalink)
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OK here it is

Damn Good to outstanding what a wonderful Model you have there!

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Old 05-02-2005, 11:00 AM   #10 (permalink)
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It's hard to take a bad picture of Kristen. I love the color of her dress and eyes.

Seems a little soft in the face, but not that bad.
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