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Working on Attitude!!!!
Old 04-30-2005, 08:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Good, Bad? you tell us!
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Re: Working on Attitude!!!!
Old 04-30-2005, 09:17 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Definitely like the second one. I don't like the expression in the first one though. The second one has some serious attitude! Great work. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Working on Attitude!!!!
Old 04-30-2005, 10:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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To add to Mike's comments,

On the first image, it's a little thing, but your perspective (looking down at her just a little bit) tends to shorten her neck and kinda puffs up her cheeks. Her expression is kinda forced.. just doesn't look naturally happy.

I notice that most of your images, and these two are included, are waaaaay red and a little bit blue when I look at them on either my desktop or my laptop, which both match very well. I imported your image into Photoshop and adjusted the red (-60) and blue (-11) in the color adjustments. Watch your email and I'll post it back to you to see how it looks on your monitor - mine is not calibrated using a mechanical device, so it's possible that our systems may just be out of whack with each other moreso than we see with other folks' systems.

Now, on your second shot.. it rocks! Might try having her drop that closes shoulder a bit amd bring her right arm out enough so that we see where that magical appearing hand comes from, or hide the hand altogether.

It's been very interesting watching your progress through the past few weeks/months... keep up the good work!

Here's one of Melissa to prove you don't always have to drop the shoulder, either! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img]
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Re: Working on Attitude!!!!
Old 04-30-2005, 11:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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First one she looks like she's in pain so I am not in favor of that attitude.

Second one....She looks a lot more confident with her attitude and I actually think it's one of her best images. However, the hands are too posed.

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Old 05-01-2005, 01:21 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Wayne..I got your image in my email....on my monitor it completely took away the true color of her hair......she almost looks blonde.
and her skin tone has a tint of green.
So I think we are out of whack!
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Now if only I can do it again. lol

Thank you

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Thank you Wayne. We have worked very hard at me not giving him that come hither look. I am no longer his wife when we go in the studio. Dang that is hard to do.

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JT! you dont realize how hard we've worked just to get a thumbs up from you on an image!!!!! That says more than I can about how we feel about your work!
Thank you sir!!!!
and Thank everyone for thier critiques!
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Whewwwwwww ty JT. We work very hard and study everything all at once. I think we are finally getting most of it to come together.

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Lift the head up a little bit. What kind of attitude?



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