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Old 04-27-2005, 08:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Okay its a slow night on here...so I'd thought Id post some images for critique.
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Old 04-27-2005, 09:33 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I'm not really qualified to critique glamour but I thought I'd take the opportunity to say that your wife's hair looks good to me. I can see trying different styles but long full hair like that is a gift. It's like sixpack abs, only certain people will ever have it.
As long as I'm typing, I like the pose in #1 best and the catchlights in #3 are nice.
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Old 04-27-2005, 11:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I'm diggin' it, Don. Just how many shots do you have of your Mrs? Keep posting 'em, coz i'll keep looking. Beats hanging off a building on a ratty old rope.

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Old 04-28-2005, 01:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Yeah, me again....LOVE 2 & 3, #1 looks like she's in pain....But the skin tones look really good! IMHO.

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Old 04-28-2005, 07:01 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Image 1 - Image would serve better in a tight 3/4 crop just underneath the shirt. Lose the chair you sit with to eat dinner.

Image 2 - Her right leg needs to cross her left leg. With a structured pose it will line up better and those legs well stretch tall.

It's not Tea Time and it's not time for pretty portraits. Change the attitude to more sexy vs ok honey, smile.

Image 3 - Block out everything but her left side of her face. Look at the nose shadow. Is that side attractive in the photograph?

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Old 04-28-2005, 02:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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JT you're right that does make a better image...Im a glutton for full body from head to toe maybe thats an amatuers quirk of mine.
now on the second Image....we tried the sexy route...no one like them..as she still working on her facial expressions...we had alot of comments of wanting her to go back to her smile..so we did...but I do understand your point. once she masters her expressions, I think you'll see a change. (tips on pulling out expressions from your models would be great)
Now onto the third image....you said the left side of her face should be all in shadow? including the eye? I see your point about the dark nose shadow..
Would love your input!
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Old 04-28-2005, 02:35 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Does cropping below the knee on her left look amputated?
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Old 04-28-2005, 02:42 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Mike, DeAnn is my only Dependable model....and we are in the process of learning, on both parts, my photography and her modeling....so Im guessing I have over 5,000 images of her.....but only a few I post...because..well...they arent so good ..from my photographic abilities! Im always practicing, anytime someone suggests trying something new or different..thats when you usually see new images of her..some work, some fail, but thats all the process of learning.
for us its alot of fun..DeAnn wants to learn so she can work with other photographers for different styles...
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Old 04-28-2005, 05:04 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Hi Don,
The tighter crop does seem to look better. It looks bolder and sexier. Nice Job. JMO

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You're lucky you have a full time model. Good for the both of you. I'm seeing some nice stuff coming from the Fantasies Image camp. Keep it up. What's with the black eye? DeAnn smack you for getting a little touchy-feely on the set?

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