She's a pretty girl and has a nice figure. There are a few things I'd work on.
The pose in the first picture is nice for her body, but bad for her face. Her left cheek is pressed into her shoulder distorting her face. I actually noticed the other side seeming wrong, but on analysis realized its the should causing the problem.
Her expression says to me "I'm so bored.".
Her make up is too shinny. And having recently shot a model who's eye brows disappeared, I'd say she needs to fill hers in some more. I'm also not thrilled with two tone hair. Might want to wait for it to grow out or be re-colored.
I think she has potential and you photography is good. Hopefully my feed back is helpful.