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Old 04-26-2005, 11:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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This is another picture from my shoot with Kat last Monday. It is one of the first full length pictures I've done and I like it, but it isn't perfect.

There was a discussion of thinning a model's shoulders by not putting any weight on them. But Kat's left looks large even though there's no weight on it. Comments?



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Re: Kat in black dress
Old 04-26-2005, 03:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I must have missed that post...and I didn't think that possible...so I won't comment there. What I think would improve the shot is to seperate her from the background more (not sure if that was possible since you were going for full length) and increase or adjust the lighting to make it pop. The image looks a little flat to me.
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Re: Kat in black dress
Old 04-26-2005, 04:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like if the shadow was little bit sharper or not present at all.. great picture like this, too!
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Old 04-26-2005, 04:47 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I posted this question while you were out of town--so at least you've got an excuse. I removed the photo in that post from my portfolio, but here it is again if you don't like the red X.

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Re: This may be what you missed...
Old 04-26-2005, 04:56 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Ahhh...I do remember that post now and I DEFINITELY remember that model. I mentioned it before, but this image is even more of a resemblance to Anna K...

She is a pretty young lady...
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Re: Kat in black dress
Old 04-26-2005, 08:36 PM   #6 (permalink)
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To me it looks less like an arm problem and more like a breast problem. It almost looks like her breast is hanging out the side of the dress there. Like maybe she had been posed laying on the floor and the dress/breast combination got "bejumbled" as my son likes to say. Then when she stood up, it didn't get fixed. I'm not saying that's what happened only that thats what it looks like to me. (Coming from a woman with ample sized breast who has these kinds of problems.)

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