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Another Sarah image - too much hair?
Old 04-24-2005, 10:33 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Overall critiques, please, and specifically: does the fly-away hair ruin the shot, or enhance it?

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Re: Another Sarah image - too much hair?
Old 04-24-2005, 10:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Very nice photo. Great looking model, too.

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Overall critiques, please, and specifically: does the fly-away hair ruin the shot, or enhance it?

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I think it did both .. I would like it if the visible section of her hand was not partly covered by blowing hair. Second problem is that the two shadows of her hand that are on the hair (from behind) are distracting. I think I talked too much about this great picture... so, I'll stop!

BTW: Do you have one without hair blowing? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Re: Another Sarah image - too much hair?
Old 04-24-2005, 11:26 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I have been staring at this image for 3 minutes...I haven't gotten to the hair yet. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

I don't really think it ruins it, but it is a bit distracting. I would at least try to clean up the flyaways at the back and top, I think that ould help it a lot. Great shot...I am still hoping to shoot with her someday.

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Ok...how\'s this?
Old 04-25-2005, 12:17 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Trimming back the fly aways....



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Re: Ok...how\'s this?
Old 04-25-2005, 02:40 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I am staring at it again, but have not made it to the hair part yet. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

Much better. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Re: Another Sarah image - too much hair?
Old 04-25-2005, 04:44 AM   #6 (permalink)
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personally, i like the shot and the model but i find the hair covering her arm a bit distracting.

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Re: Ok...how\'s this?
Old 04-25-2005, 03:08 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Nooooooo... now it doesn't look natural. Hair around the elbow... suddenly disapperas from the photo (cropping is evident). Or something like a hairy hand [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] Earlier one was better!
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AHA!
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So this photo thing IS subjective!

LOL!

Back to the drawing board....

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