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Marissa and a Hat
Old 04-24-2005, 12:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Shot on a rainy day in Portland. Comments welcomed.
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Re: Marissa and a Hat
Old 04-24-2005, 08:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I really like the pose, the attitude, the composition and the lighting. Very nicely done.

It may be this ancient laptop (or my even more ancient eyes), but it looks as if the brim and crown of the hat are in sharper focus than her eyes - a bit disconcerting. But as I say, it may be just me.

How did you get such even lighting under such a hat brim?
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Very good pix. Same interrogation as Iford for the light on the face (most of the light seems to come from the right hand side). Also, a little too much of the balck clothe at the bottom. needs a slightly tighter crop there, imho. I usually am wary of "one eye" pix, but here it works beautifully. You may want to accentuatate the iris a bit, may be....
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Thank you for your comments...To get the even lighting under the brim, I simply had my assistant use a reflector to bounce light back up to her face. It was a rainy and grey day, but the reflector still did its job. Here's one with both eyes showing.

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Thank you for the suggestions and critique. Here's another with a tighter crop horizontally.

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