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Another one for Critique..
Old 04-21-2005, 11:54 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Another one for Critique..
Old 04-21-2005, 12:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think the light drops off too much. I'd like to see more light from her waist down. I like the back light and the pose. Nice set also.

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Re: Another one for Critique..
Old 04-21-2005, 12:22 PM   #3 (permalink)
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from about her elbows up its a very good shot.
From there down it looks over PSd almost like a different photo.
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Re: Another one for Critique..
Old 04-21-2005, 12:31 PM   #4 (permalink)
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too much PS burn on the bottom otherwise good image and pose
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Re: Another one for Critique..
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I agree with the others that the light falls off too much. I also think that her head seems out of proportion with her body. Maybe it is the pose or something. Would like to see some others from the shoot though.

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Re: Another one for Critique..
Old 04-21-2005, 02:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Her head looks big. Maybe from the camera angle.
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The burn of the edges is a bit too intense. While it elimates background objects, I feel the whole photo is now too dark.
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